Reflection:

• scarlet letter essay- My essay was about the theme of unconfessed sins killing out ones soul and spirit. I used the characters Dimmesdale, Roger, and Hester to show this. Each one of my body paragraphs was about one of the three characters. I showed how Dimmesdale and Roger were affected by their sins. I also talked about how Hawthore used Hester to show that by confessing your sins you can gain strength and knowlage. One thing that i had to revise in my essay was i had to take out some sentences because they just summerized the story and did not do anything for my essay. Then i added more details. http://http://docs.google.com/Doc?docid=dhbbnhkq_2dmdvbt&hl=en
• Nature Essay- My essay was about how my experiences related to those of Emerson and Thoreau. I described my experiences and related it to examples from the text. My body paragraphs were about how nature provided inspiration, protection, and encouragement. When revising my essay i noticed that i needed to add more details and i also needed to explain more parts of my essay.http://http://docs.google.com/Doc?docid=dhbbnhkq_4cz4z2v&hl=en
• I have learned many things about writing in this class. I have leared how to make my introduction paragraphs better. I have also learned how to add brushstrokes to my writing and include more details to make it more interesting. Another thing that i have improved on is my grammer. This class has improved my writing so much since last year.